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..and all.


This is a different editting of a pic I uploaded before:

I intended to just make the skin darker, on advice from ~0Hamster0 and =AIREEShadow; but then I got a bit carried away, and I thought a darker look fitted the theme (pirates and mermaids and revenge and all) a lot better.

What do you think?
Image size
656x372px 218.99 KB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-FZ18
Shutter Speed
10/2000 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
15 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 23, 2009, 3:51:23 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

According to my previous critique, I want say some words about this edition. As Nelleke said, she had made this photo darker. And it became much better, I should say! Vision is awesome! Originality, sure still the same...
Anyway, I put those stars in case I pretend I didn't see previous variant <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />.
What becomes better:
1) Hair. Amazing detalisation! And those bloom in left bottom corner I count also as plus.
2) Skin. It looks much better. But in the left it grainy a bit, but this is all ok, accorning on that this is just photo edit.
3) Eye. It is now like in frame of mist. Victoria!

Precious edition <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />